Let me introduce myself ( to you )

My name is  최주봉.

I was born in 서울.

I live with my parents and  one sister (..brothers)

My hobbies are listening the music and riding the bicycle.

My favorite singer is 신화.

because they are very hansom guys, and their dancing is wandorful.

I have a dream.

This summer vacation, I will study hard.

So when I become a man, I"ll be a doctor.( scientist)

I hope to make my friends all of you. Thank you.

이상 교과서적 연습이었슴.

제건 연습해본거니까 믿지말고, 네이버나 야후가서 영어자기소개 치면 쓸만한데 나올걸요?

Lets study English, from now on.

Is it right?

Somebody teach me, if there is a wrong sentence.